Nice playthrough. I'll have to watch it more in-depth sometime.  So, I would like to note something. Supposedly, there was an alternative scene inputted if Reize had lost against his special battle. I haven't gotten that far to get to the point yet, but I wanted to see how it has turned out so far.Also, your Steam review was very well thought out and worth the read.

...Rewatching this has also revealed to me that a lot of the dialogue that my editor and I had made was heavily modified. sigh

I swear to god, some of the sections from that City Sky level look like they're were copied from Stratus Man's stage