Jax getting abstracted would be a sight to see, and would lead to some great creativity, because there isn’t really much that might drive him insane, since he knows how to keep himself amused.

The way she just smiles when she notices that she's abstracting is so creepy

I love that Jax is actually concerned when he sees Pomni Abstracting

honestly, pomni abstracting seems like a good way to end off a first season. if somehow due to plot armor she overcomes it.

There are a lot of small details

i like the idea of pomni finding the real exit right as she abstractes. and i also like the idea that jax see's it as it fades away (the it here being the real exit)

I can totally see this happening in the ending of the show, and that's both awsome and terrifying

The dark eye circles for Pomni makes a lot of sense. She's been looking for a exit as soon as she got through this circus so it makes sense that Pomni would stay up all night looking for it.

Amazing work. Love the face expression of Pomni

Fun fact: Characters actually abstract when they go insane trying to find an exit or adventuring to far and that’s basically what Ragatha was talking about how going crazy can make you forget who you even are and why you exist. Abstraction is created off of a crazy DESIRE for just something that they can never achieve. That’s what all the exit doors in the back and on top of her mean. SHE CAN NEVER LEAVE.

I feel like Pomni might be a bit insane already but its also possible she could abstract literally in any episode

when pomni smiles when she realises she’s getting abstracted is honestly scary, it’s almost like she’s GLAD she’s abstracting, so she won’t have to suffer anymore

I like Jax looking at least a little visibly upset over seeing this happen to her. Dude's an asshole but I feel like he'd probably drop his douchebag act if he saw her tweaking really badly. It'd be wholesome to see in a future episode. Although I doubt it since in the pilot they had Kaufmo practically die and aside from running from him, everyone kind of glossed over his "death" and didn't seem to care lol.

I like that you sticked with the animalistic appearance the abstracted have.

Don't know why but Jax's reaction here is absolutely perfect. You always see him smug and uncaring in all the scenes he has been in so far, but this animation shows him upset, disappointed, and genuinely concerned here. Amazing

Two points:

i really like the way realistic and humanoid proportions, it actually makes things just look way more unnerving as it in a way reminds you how they used to be human beings, also i like the way you made her well... abstract, i wasn't exactly scared of kaufmo's abstraction, but just seeing they way the icky black stuff just blasted off of her was just unnerving, good job

The fact that she's smilling make it obvious that she gone crazy (also very cool drawings)