Breaths In, Takes Hands Together BOYYYYYYYYYYY!

This is Carol :) I love this! You are a great rapper keep up the good work and dont let people get you down! :)

Keep on practicing you will discover your style and yourself through your music! Don't worry about what people think about you because as im sure you know there are more haters than supporters! keep doing your thing and if this is your dream bro then follow it!

Hey man, love this song but what happened to your other one? I think it was called "Hate" or something.

flow :00

so I can't believe something I produced this early in life has gotten so much attention haha. I sound dryer than camel pussy and monotone af. I have a Dubstep release if anyone is interested www.soundcloud.com/v22ndetta thanks for all the love, haters: I was like 16 and green af. I'm potentially going to come back hard bit who knows how life will turn out

Voice 0/10

Good job brotherman....got me jumping of the individual named addressed herein you have potential for growth keep it simple and effective... your owning it....

wow this was some straght fire oh my god you are crawzy talented like the eye of the spider kid

Got the lyrics down good! But the flow ain't there just yet, timing is on point, but bring out more effort and your inner self into your flow and your raps could be somewhere man, also what does "O H G T A D"stand for?

Wtf you sound like you ate dry waffles with spoiled milk before you made this

breath control and a few other aspects need work but you've got nice structure. keep it up

Good rap man, I give you credits for that.

poems turning to rap be like

well honestly... for me

nice keep it up man subbed to you

It's nice, your dedication brings you far. Lyrics are intellectually challenging, you could work more on the persuasion you express through the tone of your voice.